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hehe,what a happy naga~ we need more preys~
So I'd like to say, that you did a wonderful job of utilazing the naga tail throughout this comic, especially in something like the first panel. That intricate wrapping is really looking lovely. Really liking Kinana's expression in addition to how you did her hair, and bust as well. Anatomy for the two of them looks lovely as well.
Second panel look quite nice with that squeeze going on and those bellyshots which Im sure you adore, Also would like to say tail looks nice and think, and the expression on Kinana's face really shows how easy this is for her.
Third panel is looking quite nice as well, particularly underneath Wendy where it really gives off a fleshy sort of feeling for the insides, not sure if you'd be able to convey that above her as well, but would certainly add an even greater sense of constriction if you could. Kinana is looking wonderful in that pose, with now a nice tongued belly it seems like~ Love that hair once again. Also while not exactly a complaint, I feel like the tail has significantly shrunken since the first two panels, though that may just be the pov throwing me off.
Final panel is wonderful with those delicious fats and a lovely bust up as well. Loose clothing looks nice and Kinana's expression appears to be quite jolly~
A nice sequence overall!
You’re right about adding a flesh roof on top. I’ll keep that in mind. I do like the idea of having prey’s in very small compact stomachs.
The tail length is an error. I was going more for looks in the pose, than the actual length of the tail. I do need to watch out for that.
THIS HOT